Saturday, September 3, 2011

Where Have You Gone Joe DiMaggio?

This is a blog about perseverance, motivation and reinvention, or, quite simply, the comeback story.

Let’s face it, nothing tugs at the public’s heartstrings more than the Comeback Kid’s fall from grace or victory, and eventual ascension back to glory. We’re all searching for our heroes.

There are plenty of these stories in circulation, especially involving the travails of professional athletes – be it their bouts with shoulder dislocations or tarnished reputations. Look at Lance Armstrong and Alex Rodriguez.

And with preparations for the 2012 Summer Olympic Games in London (a k a Games of the XXX Olympiad) in full swing, who knows what compelling tales might surface. Let’s not also forget the new football season, college and pro; and the hockey and basketball season set to begin this fall. Then there’s the final stretch of baseball...

You get the picture.

So why have I chosen to focus on athletic comebacks, besides the fact that there’s no shortage of material to write about?

In a word: passion, and, to some extent, identification. O.K., those were two words. The truth is, I truly admire the determined spirit of all athletes. They fill me with hope and inspiration. And there’s so much that we can all learn from them and apply to our daily lives – teamwork, sportsmanship, mutual trust and a very strong work ethic, for starters.

My interest in sports began in childhood, when I played intramural basketball in grade school and spent countless nights at the Nassau Coliseum on Long Island watching the pros play and corralling them later to autograph my basketball. In my household the TV was always set to baseball in the spring and summer and football in the fall and winter. Later, after I had my own children, I instilled the importance of staying physically active. My house rule was this: you have to play one sport (your choice) per season. (And unlike me, they had far more to choose from.)

My daughters and I would often run together and compete in road races and triathlons, sometimes in relays. I have completed countless races over the years, including nine marathons.

I was never a standout athlete – more of a middle-of-the-pack competitor – though I did take home a handful of trophies. But what I lacked in athletic prowess, I made up for in my acute interest. 

As a journalist, I have written a few sports-related pieces, and have had the chance to interview the real pros. I also write a second blog about sports injuries, which chronicles my own journey to recovery from  arthroscopic hip surgery.

Yes, I am waiting ever so patiently for my own comeback. I'll keep you posted.

2 comments:

  1. I hate to be too critical but I have a few problems with this post. You start by saying "This is a blog about perseverance, motivation and reinvention, or, quite simply, the comeback story." but you end up in the final sections talking about yourself like you did in your bio. I feel a little lost as to the details of your 'comeback'. Where is the perseverance? Give me more. What is your real motivation - your kids? Your work? Your husband? Or is it all those things? Or is it the essence of the athlete?
    Be careful of using commas in breaks of thought (...,or,quite simple,...) - don't want too many breaks, it makes the flow of the piece stumble. Don't say "You get the picture" - what if we don't? You have to describe the picture, it is the only way of getting your point across. Never assume we understand what your saying. If your going to use "for starters" maybe put that at the beginning of the paragraph.
    Overall you started this piece with an interesting, convincing idea but I started to get lost around the third paragraph. Some of us are not huge athletes or sports fans. Just make it clear to us that your story is about a triumph, a comeback, a perseverance - focus on what it is that draws us to your inspiration and strengths. Where did Joe go? Does any of the song themes translate into this piece?

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  2. I agree with Drake, Sadie.

    The conversational tone is distracting for a post that should be direct. Both assignments this week are precursors of an About Page or a post that defines the rest of the blog. Nine times out of ten, the topic and credibility argument is a better bio than the bio assignment because it focuses your narrative.

    Or it doesn’t. These assignments should also make you question your choice. Are you invested in this?

    I don’t hear enough of you in your subject. Your resume is not enough. You ran this many races. You swam this many laps. In your writing sample, the numbers alone almost defined the passion, almost, but that was better written than this, and I was still left wondering why 4am?

    The truth is, the fact is, a lot of this is superfluous. The Comeback Kid? Where have you gone Joe DiMaggio? You get the picture. Not only could I mistake this for a baseball essay, your headline is a cliché. Headlines are everything online – equal to title pages. Often, they are the thesis.

    Your bio is well written and makes the exact point I intend. We are all scattered. The web requires focus.

    I have to defer to Yankee Chicken again. Her bio shows a clear narrative in her life. She wants to do it herself. She grew up in the city and it pushed her into the country. I can identify with that, even if I love New York. I love my family cabin too.

    When I want to sooth my inner dirty fingernails… Yankee Chicken.

    An interactive voice is a destination. I know you can create that. I know you can fashion unique metaphors that are also ideas that belong on a blog masthead.

    DiMaggio? I want you to put your topic into new words that reawaken me to the truths behind athleticism, and the power of words.

    Don’t waste your time making up a new halfhearted subject, when you already have one.

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